true love

my presction of love

TRUE LOVE

the longing for true friend

that cares for you till the end

the feeling of

a lonely heart

until a girl is found

and till death do they part

when that girl is finally found

he will lift her of the ground

a special time between to lovers

to share the years of fun to come

 

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

aren't we all wanting to find the perfect lover????wouldn't that be almost unreal????

this was short and sooo sweet!!! i'm 13 and i think that this is really good.. people on here think that you're stuff won't be as good cause you're age, and i know how that feels, but i think you just proved all those people wrong...nice job!!!

~may

[Ari]

Not a bad place to start. Try inserting some descriptive words so that we can SEE what you're talking about. I think it would be a great addition.

[Michael Kerr]

very short but very good. i like this poem. it tells of love and i have felt this way
but she says she could never love me as much as i love her. i wish i could write
stuff like this its seems happier.
Great Job
keep writing
-mike-

[peace SiGN./index DOWN.]

great writing

[oranges_melt]

I agree with WordMaster. Great poem! Very sweet.

[WordMaster]

What a heart warming, soul-searching poem

Short and to the point, with just enough room to allow imagination to take hold

Nicely done