I miss the warmth

my first time with someone

had left me cold

I remember it all, as if it was an ache in my shoulder

the unfairness that my first time wasn't with someone that loved me

do I love him though?

no, I dont

but I loved that moment of him

where he would stare at me 

and run his hands along my skin

I loved that warmth

even if my chest tightened every time 

I saw him and thought about him afterwards 

it was bittersweet

but waiting for him 

to come back to me

never meant anything to him

and showed that it was never meant to be

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Not too bad. A decent young adult themed poem. The final stanza is an interesting way to consider if someone is worth loving, but I would say it's probably not an emotionally healthy way.

On the last line you forgot the word "was" between "it and "never".

[Pengem]

hey thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!

and thanks for picking up that error

[Davidgeo]

It was my pleasure.