The Story Of A Broken Girl And Her Broken World

Don't know where this came from honestly but I kinda like it...

[Verse 1]

 

Her friends call her special,

Her parents more so,

But she feels dead,

For reasons they won't know.

 

Academically gifted,

Shy at best,

But the one she loves,

He gave her a test.

 

She sits all alone,

Isolated in her mind,

Looks at the video,

Hates what she'll find.

 

[Chorus]

 

So just sing,

And just shout,

Don't give up,

Till they hear you out.

 

And it hurts,

To survive,

But never let them

take you alive.

 

[Verse 2]

 

Her boyfriend's lying,

To her face,

Inside she's dying,

She knows her place.

 

She can't walk away,

They've come too far,

And all he's got to say,

She meant nothing.

 

Back in her room,

With a broken heart,

Picks up the pieces,

That's how she'll start.

 

[Chorus]

 

So just sing,

And just shout,

Don't give up,

Till they hear you out.

 

And it hurts,

To survive,

But never let them

take you alive.

 

(Bridge)

And no one knows that in the night,

Her will to live,

Is so contrite.

 

And all the stuff,

That once made sense,

Is firmly placed,

In past tense.

 

So when you feel,

Down and out,

Close your eyes,

And.

 

{SHOUT!!!}

 

[Chorus]

 

So just sing,

And just shout,

(I can't hear you now,

You're voice is so loud.)

Don't give up,

Till they hear you out.

(I can't hear you now,

You're voice is so loud.)

 

And it hurts,

To survive,

(I can't hear you now,

You're voice is so loud.)

But never let them

take you alive.

 

I can't hear you now,

You're voice is,

Oh,

So,

Loud.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think...I don't usually write stuff like that...

Reviews

[Kelly M.]

I like the new Tom! Haha, this was really good! Seriously:) I was singing it in my head, aha. As the song continues it mounts up your anticipation and hope. It feels freeing at the end, sort of speak. It was as the past was let go and the future was brighter because of that. And that's that. Great job:)

[John F Carver]

Not much for songs, but it sounds okay to me.