Eyes

When i get tired and miss someone i get...sweet i guess

They say eyes hold many a thing,
In fact it's our eyes that sing,
They hold such much thoughts,dreams even a deep fear,
In such a simple tear,
Can mean so much,
Eyes welling at the smallest touch,
When I look you in the eye,
I almost utter a cry,
So deep,
They can lull me to sleep,
They've witnessed the places we've been,
Truly yours are the most beautiful I've ever seen.

Author's Note

I actually kinda like it xD

Reviews

[sherwin]

I like it in its simplicity, and I like the subject matter youre writing about. good job. Keep challenging yourself wiith imagery, visuals, metaphors, all that.:)

[DearSweetAgony]

Me too.
I like it a lot.
You did a great job.
(as always)

[Sammi]

I love it :) Your eyes are gorgeous, I get lost in them :)
They've seen many a thing they shouldn't have, but they've also brightened many a smile :)

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

aww. Thats a very sweet poem. I like that one alot. Good write!

[Kelly M.]

It's so sweet and beautiful! You should like it! It's really cute. :)