Love

I got...i dunno, i'm missing someone...

Love destroyed me,
Now love's saved me,
It's only in this dark I see,
Baby this love is me and thee.

Author's Note

Very short and kinda crap but simple. I may elaborate on it later.

Reviews

[sherwin]

Definetly elaborate. Not that I dont like it but only that its a good subject matter and you have the ability to. Otherwise good job.

[Kelly M.]

Love can be the best thing in your life, and then it can be the worst. Great write! :)

[EvilAngel]

Short and sweet. It says all that needs to be said when you're missing someone. Anything someone says from the heart is never crap. I don't believe in bad write. Basically, lol, you're good and this is an awesome, heartfelt piece.

[Sammi]

I'm in shock... And I don't know if it's from how amazing this poem is although short, or that you used the word 'baby' :') ,3