Falling

Falling

A Poem by cynicalbeliever
"

Everyone feels weak sometimes. Everyone falls sometimes. Everyone needs catching sometime.

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I've fallen before,
Spectacularly too,
One everyone saw coming,
One I refused to believe,
But then I crumbled,
And fell.

People rebuilt me though,
Their hope broke my walls,
I could open up at last,
I still can.

My mask is shattered now,
The pieces fallen turned to dust,
For the first time,
The world is seeing the real me.

Let them see the real you.

Tear the mask off yourself,
Before the world forces it to remain.

Break your walls,
Before the world breaks you.

Noone can handle everything themselves,
That's why there are others,
To help you.

Believe me nothing is easy,
There's no doubt you'll fall,
And when you do...

I'll catch you.

© 2011 cynicalbeliever


Author's Note

cynicalbeliever
Based on various conversations i've had with various people, might be good might not be but ah well.

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sweet. romantic. empathetic. Very bright emotions, its all you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LOVE IT!
Its so real,and so true!
You are very good when it comes to this topic.
I understand every feeling,every raw emotion.
Flawless Job!
Great Work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. I love you. I love random reviews like this. I love fullstops...... Meh f*ck it, I love you :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it! When someone falls, catch them. Hold them up so they don't crumble. That's true friendship. Great write!! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2011
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cynicalbeliever
cynicalbeliever

Eastrington, Middle of nowhere, United Kingdom



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I'm Tom, 19, supposed mechanic. When I think on my past I see alot of mistakes, I see a bitter person, angry at anything and everything. But thankfully some truly amazing people literally saved my lif.. more..

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