Cockroaches Aren't The Only Thing To Survive A Nuke

First song I've wrote in quite a while hence it's not quite great, hope you like it anyway.

[Verse 1]

Snow falls,

Falls fast,

This peace we've got,

It can never last.

They're hot on our heels now,

We can't escape,

One chance left,

It's not too late.

[Chorus]

So let me rescue you,

Like you rescued me,

We could shut our eyes,

And be whatever we can be.

         [Whatever we can be!]

[Verse 2]

Sky's blood red now,

It's like my tears,

Gun to my chest,

They amplify your fears.

[RUN!FIGHT!SHOOT!KILL!]

I drop to my knees covered in blood,

What happens to me doesn't matter now,

I'll fight them off,

You'll make it through somehow.

[Chorus 2]

So let me rescue you,

Like you rescued me,

We could shut our eyes,

And be whatever we can be.

         [Whatever we can be!]

[RUN!]

[Bridge]

They'll chase us all the time,

But we'll strike them down,

We know we're not a crime,

So can I rescue you?

[CAN I RESCUE YOU?!]

[Chorus 3]

So let me rescue you,

Like you rescued me,

We could shut our eyes,

And be whatever we can be.

         [Whatever we can be!]

So let me rescue you,

Like you rescued me,

We could shut our eyes,

And be whatever we can be.

         [Whatever we can be!]

[SO LET ME RESCUE YOU!]

Author's Note

I honestly don't know if i like it or not. The [ ] indicates screaming, the tempo of the song is fairly slow, think 'The Only Hope For Me' mixed with more screaming and you're close.

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like it. I would enjoy hearing it set to music!

[Skoo.]

This is brilliant, I would love to actually hear this song played (: