A Walk in the Forest by Levi Levin

Simple poem of observation in the forest.

A WALK IN THE FOREST

Walking through the forest one day I leaned upon a tree,

I came to see all of nature and to feel its peace.

In the distance is it the wolf’s joyful howl that I hear,

Or is it a fearful howl ringing in my ear.

Beneath my feet I see ants working in such unity,

Among mankind I see confusion without remedy.

I see an owl with a wise look on its brow,

Just a day ago I heard a man needing answers scream “how!”

I walked over and beheld some flowers all with different colors,

It made me think about the different races and the conflicts of others.

Now I am watching a mother bird willfully feed her young,

Then I wondered why many children has never heard love sung.

There is so much beauty here for me to behold,

I must come again when I have more time and watch it unfold.

LEVI LEVIN

 

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

SWEET & INTROSPECTIVE. I LIKE THE RHYME SCHEME.

REGARDS,
AL

[Simran Kewlani]

This poem depicts the similarities shred between mankind and nature. Just like the mother bird feeds her little baby, the same way a mother feeds her new born baby. This has too mush deep meaning. Thank you for sharing.

[LL]

Thank you again Simran:)

[A. Amos]

LL this one is simply marvelvous and the way you took your readers into the forest and your kind message, through nature acts, i have to congrat you on such a amazing thought and honestly world need more stuff like your's. Bravo!

[LL]

Thank you my friend for your support!

[A. Amos]

Honor and pleasure is all mine

[LightforChrist]

I love the forest and the many beautiful things you can see there as well. You have done an amazing job describing this majestic place in nature with so much detail and imagrey. Great job and keep writing! :)

[LL]

Thanks so much, sorry so long. I overlooked this.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ me love the forest it's so peaceful and beautiful. I like the different comparisons you did, they are interesting and something one may think of when taking a walk in the forest and pondering about life.

Good Job

[LL]

Thank you so much my friend.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome