Love In Her Eyes

Two years ago your eyes shown 

With a kind of light I wish I understood.

Happiness captured in flecks of blue, 

Always true, but the truth is not all it should be

I can remember the day I met you

Your shirt didn't match your shoes and I told you so

That night we kissed underneath the moon

You said how did I get to be so lucky?

What I didn't say was I felt lost there.

And always I find that I can pretend to love you

and I can pretend to love someone else too

but every time I feel something new

I push and I fight I scream and I bite

but always I'm stuck here waiting

for my soul with love in her eyes.

 

Last year your eyes shown

with a kind of light I understood

Happiness hiding the fleeting truth

still flecked with blue, but sadder then they should be

I'm sorry that I felt so empty

And slowly I found that I can't love you

and that was just something that was not fair to you

so I had to let your whole heart go 

had to give it to a better home

I can have it back when I'm done waiting

For my soul with love in her eyes

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The only thing that could mirror this is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3kFPBtc9BE

[Harmonica winds]

Wow such a beauty of a piece, a very powerful read. I like this write so much. Tugs at the heart.

[Sarah]

very powerful and sweet...

[Antonio Valentino]

Absolute brilliance. Took me a while to get through it, many pauses of amazment making it linger on beautifully. One of the better pieces I've read in a long time. Wow how many I had to read to finally stumble upon this gem.

Very, very good. You did a terrific job with this piece.
Antonio

[Science girl]

Thanks for the share, enjoyed this very much. Such a beautiful piece!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice write and also the grace is highly appreciated, thanks for sharing..

[Little Birdie]

Heartbreaking. I can somehow relate to most of your poems one way or another. Certainly know the feeling. You're probably one of my favourite authors around :)

[Sarah]

nice work meg. this was writen with true passion

[Brenden Taylor]

Nice wordflow, Meg. I love the elements of echo you've got in here. I also relate to the emotion, and you reflect it so well. Good job.

[Dark Beauty]

Great heartfelt write,wonderfully written with honesty. Loved it