Hide and Seek

Dear Who I Used To Be,
take that last part of me and set her free. Let her go.
Dear Who I Want To Be,
keep in mind that you may never be totally, completely who you are.
And Dear Who I Am Today,
remember that you always have a say in what exactly happens to your heart.

Change is a good thing when it’s done right
Change is the better thing when you finally see the light

I never was one to chase my dreams 
until my dream was right in front of me so close, but out of reach.
I let it go and I lost a part of me.
I let it go but now I’m a better me.

You learn with every dream you let slip away
so that the bigger ones will stay, stay, stay.
And when you get the chance to make those bigger dreams realties
you know to hold on, don’t let go. 
Yes, hold on, don’t let go.

Reviews

[Sarah]

It is lovely, I think the best part is where you said "yes, hold on, don't let go".
lovely work meg...

[Coyote Poetry]

Last lines is true wisdom. Must keep the dreams alive and hope strong. The poem told a good story. Most of us will give up before the opportunity to do great things is possible. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Eagle Cruagh]

Hold on, don`t let go.
This is a thought to live by
especially for a young person.
You have a firm hold on reality
and you can write.
Your writing is beautiful, excellent
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing! I like whole wording.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "Anguish and She"
God bless you!
Lucky!

[Olive Belikov]

I love this and I could totally see this as a song with the last verse as the choras. It flows beautifully too. Great job !
:)

[Myenigma]

hide and seek, interesting conception. Change is a good thing when it’s done right!! It is!

[Brandon]

"I never was one to chase my dreams
Until my dream was right in front of me so close, but out of reach
I let it go and I lost a part of me.
I let it go (but now I'm a better me)."

This verse slipped unnoticed through the window, knowing the door was barred, and stole all of my unspoken words and sat in their place. I love this piece very much.

[Jeremy Baker]

I like the writing that speaks truth the best ... great write!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Sweet and sour...... the realisation.

[Becky C Strukamp]

I agree with Ta Shandra, very inspiring.