The Bluebird

The Bluebird

A Story by clns123
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This is a moment in my life I will never forget; the promise of freedom.

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I cried today.
Not something I'm particularly proud of - nor something of which I am ashamed.
I leaned on the fence in my backyard, and let the tears run down my face freely, as I whispered to God.
I don't want money.
I don't want the best job.
I don't want the biggest house, or the nicest car.
All I want is to be able to lay my head down at night and smile. 
To be happy. 
To anticipate the morning.
I felt the wind brush against my wet cheeks, as the sky darkened, the thick grey clouds overcoming the pale blue. 
A bluebird flew past me - it landed a few feet away, and just sat there and observed.
I wiped my hair from my face and grinned. Father always told me bluebirds were a sign of happiness.
Thank you, I told God.
I know I'll be okay.
Maybe not today.
Maybe not tomorrow.
But someday.

© 2013 clns123


Author's Note

clns123
Sorry if this seems kind of cheesy! Hope you liked it - tell me what you thought!

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Not cheesy at all! That's a beautiful poem! My mother once told me about a lady, she lost her husband, father, and son in the same week. She was giving up on god, then she saw a butterfly. Ever since then she's seen a butterfly anytime she's been upset. Isn't that amazing? I decided on my sign being a bluebird! I realize it's up to god, not me, but I ask god for a bluebird anytime I'm down, and most of the time I see one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clns123

11 Years Ago

That's such a sad story, but at least that poor woman came away from it with something amazing. And .. read more



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I think this poem is lovely! It has a nostalgic feel that welcomes one to just sit and listen with you and watch the bluebird perched upon the fence.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clns123

11 Years Ago

Aw thanks so much!(:
Not cheesy at all! That's a beautiful poem! My mother once told me about a lady, she lost her husband, father, and son in the same week. She was giving up on god, then she saw a butterfly. Ever since then she's seen a butterfly anytime she's been upset. Isn't that amazing? I decided on my sign being a bluebird! I realize it's up to god, not me, but I ask god for a bluebird anytime I'm down, and most of the time I see one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clns123

11 Years Ago

That's such a sad story, but at least that poor woman came away from it with something amazing. And .. read more

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Added on October 14, 2013
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Tags: religion, hope, freedom, family, future

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