Waiting for Summer

Waiting for Summer

A Poem by clisa
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A Spring Haiku

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Spring will not be free
While winter's icy waters
Fall from warming skies

© 2013 clisa


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sometimes winter just hangs on and hangs on...the groundhog can't shake the snow because it doesn't want to let go...and the skies aren't warming enough..

i like the idea of spring not being free...

i see reflected in this very cool piece, humans...those who cannot have rebirth of love because they can't let go of a cold past.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clisa

11 Years Ago

Thanks - I like your interpretation. I love haiku - the structure seems to bring out my creativity.



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I like the brevity, a remarkable Haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clisa

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I like the brevity of the haiku form as well.
sometimes winter just hangs on and hangs on...the groundhog can't shake the snow because it doesn't want to let go...and the skies aren't warming enough..

i like the idea of spring not being free...

i see reflected in this very cool piece, humans...those who cannot have rebirth of love because they can't let go of a cold past.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clisa

11 Years Ago

Thanks - I like your interpretation. I love haiku - the structure seems to bring out my creativity.

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Added on May 14, 2013
Last Updated on May 14, 2013
Tags: poetry, seasons, spring, summer, winter, haiku

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clisa
clisa

Spokane Valley, WA



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I am an English Major. I graduated from the University of Washington. I also am trained to cardiac ultrasound. I love reading, writing, science,art,and cooking. more..

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