2. lying love, honest hate

song for friend

sneaky, sneaking

but now the truth is leaking

but not through the misdirections you are speaking

 

shifty, shifting

your fiction fog is lifting

a hazy view of you through vows you're re-gifting

 

so many times to say what you should have said

but you lied while lying next to me in bed

 

i built our foundations on the strongest of estates

but you demolished our structure that took so long to create

i carried you on my shoulders with all your thoughtless weight

quit your lying love and give me your honest hate

 

tricky, tricking

why'd you have to pick me?

pedestal placed then dropped me so quickly

 

liar, liar

now my heart's on fire

while yours is still, beatless, chilled over entire

 

hate the player who played his cards close to his chest

it isn't the game that keeps me from getting any rest

 

had you half-truths you had to exaggerate?

or were they always empty? what brought us to this fate?

i carried you in my heart with all your thoughtless weight

quit your lying love and give me your honest hate

 

those moments were all untrue

moments we can't undo

but i don't regret how i felt

you hid what you intended

behind a sweetness invented

i also lied but only to myself

 

imagine my demise when you showed dishonest traits

any promise you make will be a promise too late

i carried you in my heart but now i’ll drop this weight

quit your lying love and give me your honest hate

Reviews

[Madhu]

A very thoughtful and beautiful write. Thank you for sharing :)

[Jordan Williams]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. That was nice of you.

[Madhu]

My pleasure :)

[Stephen]

I carried you in my heart with all your thoughtless weight
quit your lying love and give me your honest hate

~Once again, you seemed very impressive with your words~

I should again adore this beautiful song. You know what? What brings me here on your pages reading your more stuffs is your thoughts, the words and of course, your way of expressing the real feelings of your hearts through words. Much appreciated! I simply love this song and enjoyed every individual line of the beautiful piece. Keep on!

[Jordan Williams]

wow, thanks a lot for saying that. i think i'm blushing

[Stephen]

You know what .. pal ... it`s simply a masterpiece of yours. Ever since i`ve been over this site, i`ve found many talents, every--day i`m finding new talent over the webs ... in real life as well. Your this beautiful song makes me feel .. like the true--talent`s still hovering over the head of this wicked world... it`s even an honor to read your few stuffs ... umm..last time, i`d read your only two stuffs, today, i'`ll try to read some more ... and yeah, hey, keep blushing, pal ;)