Icarus Narrative

Icarus Narrative

A Poem by RannunculusBlooms
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A couple of original haikus inspired by the story of Icarus and Daedalus

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We soared like eagles,
You yearned to fly higher still,
I was left behind.

You abandoned me,
Snagged by your aspirations,
You were lost to me.

now a broken dream,
It's too late for redemption,
There is no return.

© 2017 RannunculusBlooms


Author's Note

RannunculusBlooms
I hope you like these! I am still new to haikus so any/all feedback is 1245% appreciated!!

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I've never seen them put into a series like this. It's hard enough to write one, but to have 2 more that match and build on the same theme is pretty smart.

Posted 7 Years Ago


RannunculusBlooms

7 Years Ago

yeah I figured they would make more sense if I put them in a "series" per say.

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Added on April 28, 2017
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Tags: new writer, haiku, historical, Greek, mythology, Icarus, love

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RannunculusBlooms
RannunculusBlooms

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Hi I'm Cleo! I'm 20 years old, I like good podcasts and bad music. I'm a amateur's poet and although I'm not great at poetry yet, practice makes perfect! Any feedback/criticism is incredibly helpful!!.. more..

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