Myosotis

A haiku using Myosotis blooms(forget-me-nots) as symbolism.

Always on my mind;

Beautiful, blue, spring flowers;

Please, forget-me-not.

Author's Note

Ok, this is my first ever haiku so I hope I got the rhythm right?! (5-7-5)
Any/all feedback is much appreciated!

Reviews

[Jared_Laskowski]

Very vivid! Love the imagery! Always on my mind paired with forget-me-not creates a deep double meaning and it is exquisite. Beautifully done!

[RannunculusBlooms]

OML thank you!!!