fix this from there.

fix this from there.

A Poem by Lauren

i missed you today,

unlike any other day.

i can't remember the actuality,

only the feelings.

it was safety and warmth.

it was never willing the moments to pass,

but wanting them to play in a loop.

and they do.

sometimes.

and sometimes

i wonder if everything would be alright

if you were here.

and i wonder

where you went.

are you happy?

© 2009 Lauren


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Recent losses have given way to this really hitting home. I liked it a lot. Especially this...

"it was never willing the moments to pass,
but wanting them to play in a loop."

Well done.

~True


Posted 14 Years Ago


what a lovely poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Lauren
Lauren

Atlanta, GA



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