A Start

I woke in a daze, trying to remember the events of last night. Though every attempt failed. My head was pounding and my ears assailed by the crashing waves and seagulls. I've been here for awhile, I know this because my mouth is too dry for my swollen tongue to moisten my chapped lips. I look around for any indication of why I would be on the beach only to find myself alone. I'm glad I had enough sense the night before to dress warm, the wind was blowing relentlessly. My exposed skin has started turning pink, I cringe at the thought of the burn I was going to feel. I hurry to check my pockets for my cell phone and anything that might give me a clue as to how I ended up here. When suddenly my friend Stacie calls to me from a beach house down the way.

 

 

 

 

ehhhhh thats just kinda what i came up with so far. idk if i should continue.

Author's Note

should i try to continue? or no? it's not gonna hurt my feelings if it's no lol.

Reviews

[Imara]

I think you should, I'm already itching to know the rest of it!

[Kyle]

Go for it! Add some more. I think that you should add some space/empty lines for your readers to pause a second before continuing on to another paragraph. does this make any sense?