Breaking dawn

the poem is for anyone that's going to rise up from any tragedy that they've experienced.

Like the light of dawn,

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Your own breaking dawn,

Not mourning from 

What that one tragic 

Morning has left, but 

Rising from anything 

that's left.

Author's Note

please give any kind of feedback, positive or negative will be much appreciated.

Reviews

[Writergurl]

I really enjoyed this write, like the play on words myself, much enjoyed & well written

[clcd699]

Thanks for appreciating my write it made me inspired and motivated to write more.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like the plays on words here...the morning/mourning
the two dawns....

especially like the last three lines....but I would avoid explaining the poem....let the readers
surmise an interpretation for themselves.
j.

[clcd699]

Thank you, sir, for taking the time to give me a helpful and motivating recommendation. and I hope that you'll still give me an honest review on some of my new or even old poems since I'm sure that I still have a lot to improve.

[John the Baptist]

A worthwhile motive for this offering. There will always be setbacks, thus we will always need words like these to help people find their way out of them.

[clcd699]

Thank you, Sir, for your review of my work, and I ought to provide more poems just like this, in the future.

[amanda]

At the end of your poem, too many of the sentences are kind of left on a cliffhanger making it harder to read, but overall it is able to reach deep and I am able to connect to it.

[clcd699]

Thank you, for giving an honest review. and I ought to provide more poems that can deeply touch the heart.