Darkness

As darkness flows within my being
A tingly sensation I feel swirling
The sense of frustration building in,
As doom conquers my fate of living.

Rising against the evil triumphing,
Was like battling disaster from falling
And soon I saw myself tumbling in,
The abyss of emptiness, alas, too late for saving.

Reviews

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Intense and vivid in my head. The Darkness is neverending in the chilling of nerves, always lurking close behind. Try to run, it'll grab you by the ankle and swallow you whole. Try to scream, and everything will be over. At least, that's my darkness. This poem was nicely written, the flow continous. I love it. It's short and power defying.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

that is a pretty awesome poem!!! i really like it

[paradise]

Wow I love this great freaking poem!

[Ami N.]

Short but powerful. Great write!