TELL ME ABOUT YOU?

TELL ME ABOUT YOU?

A Poem by Ivory

It ain’t easy to find someone who can match my wit
Who’s equal in experience and intellect
I pay attention to the world around me
So don’t let my sexy smile fool you
I’m so much more than what your eyes can see
You have to rock my mind, before I let you rock my body
Unique in my ability to handle any situation gracefully
You can turn to me for an honest opinion
Whether it be sports, politics or religion
And if you’re willing to get closer to me,
Then you’ll have the privilege of being able
To experience my sensuality
I just hope you can handle all of me
My kisses are toxic, penetrating your lips
But the anecdote I can release with a few twists of my hips
I’ll take you for an amazing ride,
My confidence I never try to hide
Allowing you to take your time and linger inside.
A permanent image of me will be tatted on your mind.
I can go on and on, cuz there’s so much more I can say and do
But that’s enough about me, now tell me something about you…

© 2009 Ivory


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I like this, it's bold and challenging and a little playful all at the same time. A good write. Typo in the fifth line, "your". And I'm wondering if the word "be" in the tenth line should not be "me". "Me" would seem to make more sense there. This sounds like the creed of a strong woman and I have always admired women of strength and character, great job on this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Intellectual and sensual, what a concept.
Not that far of a reach I would say. Though
brains and beauty seem to be an elusive
animal this day and age. I do believe their
are a selective few...nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i agree with the prior reviewer, it is bold and refreshing to have a woman ask tell me something about you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this, it's bold and challenging and a little playful all at the same time. A good write. Typo in the fifth line, "your". And I'm wondering if the word "be" in the tenth line should not be "me". "Me" would seem to make more sense there. This sounds like the creed of a strong woman and I have always admired women of strength and character, great job on this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ivory
Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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