Speak to me...

Inspired by the power of someones words...

My words don't always flow so freely 

But from the first day

you spoke to me, creatively

 

my words, like liquid seem to spill

I can send chills down your spine

with the lines I use to describe

any given moment in time

You are my muse

Your spirit is what I use

to help me artistically

I'm drawn to your chemistry

The force is amazing

But deadly at the same time

You posses the power to control my mind

Losing all sense of morality

Instead I want to just go after what feels right to me

Want you next to me

Your tongue silencing my worries

Your hands providing my security

Want to give you all that I have inside of me

Our bodies will make music

a sexual symphony

All of my passion  mixed with pure intensity

Pretend for a moment that our souls are meant to be

And when its over

It will be  back to reality

But I will forever hold on to the memory

It all started the day your words spoke to me...

 

Author's Note

This piece just came to me in an instant so plz forgive my errors but feel free to correct me.. lol

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Beautiful Ivory! I'm so glad to see you back on here, been a while. Very seductive piece.

It all started the day your words spoke to me...

sometimes words will pull us in more than anything else. we may not even see the person, but be drawn to them in so many other ways. believe me, i feel ya on this.

hey, talk soon.

[Lyrical Love]

Amazing! It seems as if you wrote this from the depths of 'my' soul. I am relating to this and the magic
that comes from the power of passion through the spiritual and mental connection!
Once there is this meeting of the minds~I think that it is grounding (for the physical).

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Very nice piece about your muse. Whoever got you to flow, really got you goin', huh?

Another nicely-laid, sensual piece, girl.

[Orlando Murcia]

This was the best poem I have read all day
It was wonderful

It truly was Ivory

Orlando M

[Charles D. Moorer]

See what a new PC can do for you! A few spelling errors Artistically, Morality, it's. You used the word "creatively in an akward way. i am not sure it which line it should be attached to, the third line or the fifth line. Example: you spoke to me creatively OR creatively my words, like liquid seem to spill. You have to commit where this adjective is going to be placed.

I like this poem because it shows that sometimes our source of poetic inspiration can be external, and is often external. But more, I like this poem because it also shows that our muse may be the source of eroctic imaginings. I especially like the proudness of your profile as a muse unto itself. A very nice and sincere piece. Nicely done.

[☮]

A spiritual connection is always more powerful than even the physical. Especially when that spiritual one comes first. This was a very open, seductive and expository piece that shows the true vulnerabilty of passion.

Loved it.

[Lady leah]

Very nicely penned, great write.