Lip service

Lip service

A Poem by Ivory

His lips curled

Whenever he anticipated her lips on his
Watching her apply lipstick
His mouth watered
She puckered her lips
Inviting him to taste
Instantly turned on
She swirled her tongue around his
Pulled her closer
Can’t get enough of her fragrance
Wanting to melt into her skin
Clothes fall gently to the floor
She stands there
Revealing all
Self assured
She has power
Keeping him addicted to her flesh
With just one sexy look
And some cherry colored lipstick…

© 2008 Ivory


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this was sweet with a sprinkle of spice.. a perfect blend! nice one.....

:) smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


A beautiful poem romantic poem. Nice write. Noticed one small typo. On your 9th line you have the word
Puller I think you meant pulled. Anyway I enjoyed reading your poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, full of passion, just like a poem should be, or at least how I love it to be, thanks Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect title indeed. You always know how to get the blood flowing.
I like the red effect you added on this one as well.
Another intriguing piece to your poetic puzzle.
Keep doing your thing, luv!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very sexy...i like

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done, very suggestive.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can picture the nakedness of it all, almost Eve like, with but a lipstick color of blush to hid her all womanhood, great work sweetie! ---mishy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your mind is so wonderful. I love getting a glimpse of it through your poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ivory
Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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