One more time...

If your knight in shining armore, turned out to be a fool in aluminum foil...Does that mean you should give up on the fantasy...?

Can I get your attention?
Claim your soul as my own?
No longer will you have to travel through life alone.
Let's be partners in crime.
Urban Bonnie and Clyde;
With me by your side, we could be the perfect pair.
I guarantee you,
I'm enough women to keep you from going anywhere.
Dazzle you with my warm smile and quick wit
Matching your moves and intelligent.
Bat my eyes, speaking soft and sweet.
Possessing uncontrollable passion,
Together we'd burn up the sheets.
What you see before you is a confident woman,
So don't label me a player.
Ego's I don't have time to cater.
But if your fortunate enough to accept me into your world.
Take note, I'm not like other girls.
Loving, caring and strong.
Your heart would be safe with mine.
So did I get your attention?
Because I'm willing to fall in love one more time.

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

If your knight in shining armore, turned out to be a fool in aluminum foil...Does that mean you should give up on the fantasy...?

(amazing opening line...) you have an amazing way with words Ivory. And this poem is no further from the truth. You speak of reality in such a sharp and poetic way, and I love it. Thanks for sharing, and letting us collaborate on our poem a while back. thanks.

[Raja]

The poem is such that I love to read 'one more time' again! So many good lines occupy the piece, and sometimes, I found a natural flow of words intended to say more. It seems real and energetic, and you must have enjoyed writing this poem. No second take was done I think; there are a few typos to be corrected. But those are really overlookable. I can name so many lines as my favorite ones, but I strongly want to mention "Let's be partners in crime."

I like the whole concept of this poem as being called a woman's wanting to secure her love with her man.

Thanks.

Raja

[Cornbred]

WOW, you got my attention,lol that was real good i loved it....