The Jump off...

The Jump off...

A Poem by Ivory
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some may understand where im coming from, others may not. Wrote this from personal experience and I feel as a woman i had to flip it a little : )

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I don’t need you to be my man,

Not ready to make life long plans.
But there is one thing you can do.
Be my “jump off” dude.
Come when I call,
No questions asked.
And when it over,
You will be just another from my past.
Don’t waste time using tired lines,
I know them all and won’t be surprised.
I played this game before,
Along time ago;
Now I'm much older, but I still play like a pro.
Men don’t even know, but I have total control.
My game is outrageous and it never shows.
Am I into you?
Or am I just curious to find out what you can do.
Can you give me the satisfaction I need?
Have me begging for you to get inside me?
And of course it turns me on to see,
How I can make a man weak for me.
Using my mind and my body,
Make you think you won the lottery.
It’s my best kept secret, but I’ve already exposed too much.
You can look, but can’t touch.
This is how I play the game, putting your skills to shame.
Trust me, when I’m done you’ll forever remember my name.
Just please me, when I’m in the mood.
I don’t want anything more from you,
And when you’re done this is what I’ll do.
Move on to the next, jump off dude.
 

© 2008 Ivory


Author's Note

Ivory
Yes i used a little slang and paid no attention to grammer, but if you liked this piece then you didn't mind how it was wriiten. lol

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in the place of the game there aren`t any names. to tell the truth you must know the root.. a fair exchange is no robbery. you got what u what n so did i. but time will tell if it was good as hell. that he will get another call to come to the ball. the last dance will never end just because you have a freind. the poem is really good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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in the place of the game there aren`t any names. to tell the truth you must know the root.. a fair exchange is no robbery. you got what u what n so did i. but time will tell if it was good as hell. that he will get another call to come to the ball. the last dance will never end just because you have a freind. the poem is really good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True indeed. I like the swagger. It's always nice when someone feels they have you cornered, while you're unconsciously mentally cornering them. Nice work as usual. Felt it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


*Submitting my jumpoff application* hahahahaha sike nah man... Nice aggressive write. It's sexy when a woman takes what she wants lol. Yeah... Go get it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think there are so many people out there who f**k around with people's heads that it's hard for an honest person to be interested in someone.

Posted 16 Years Ago


LMAO!!! You got that confidence and it's cool. You know what you want, when you want it. Ain't a THING wrong with that.

Keep killin' 'em with this nice flow, tho'....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Me likey!!!

"Women are pimps too, gone brush yo shouldas off."-Jay Z. I like how you assert your femininity...just a jump off...hehe. Straight up and honest.
If most people adopted this realness about sex and love and lust, there would be so much less neurosis in our society...not to mention broken hearts.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice job!! I mean, men do the same thing to us, why not show them whose boss? I personally would rather not be intimate at all, because most of them don't deserve to be physical with a goddess like me...hee hee! but i see your point here, and I think you conveyed it well. a "jump off dude" what an interesting term.

you tell them girl!!! show them whose boss!! lol

kena

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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