REBIRTH OF YOU & I

ANOTHER POEM THAT WAS POSTED OF THE SIGHT BEFORE...

RESURECT

 

Touch of your hand

Brushing tears from my cheek

Answers all my questions,

even though you never speak;

 

Show me the truth…

 

REPENT

Promise me no more lies,

No more,” I apologize”.

If I looked in your eyes, what would I find?

 

 

RESOLUTION

Commit to me today,

All past sins may be washed away,

Never to rewind;

Let them be lost in time…

Reviews

[Xeru]

Best way to describe this piece is "Freedom". Freedom from having to try to fix your past. Freedom from being apprehensive to who you are tomorrow. Beautiful write once again. The soundtrack to many people's new beginnings and the foundation of Love.

[☮]

Nice breakdown, timing and flow. Beautiful as usual!

[Charles D. Moorer]

Short and sweet!

[BrightEyes]

I thought I had read this before - think I did. I loved the way you've formatted this piece and broken it down ; using each word in bold to bring home the meaning. nicely done.