Natural Beauty

When you really love someone , you love them flaws and all...

If you love me, then you'd love every inch.

Love my lips,

the thickness of my hips.

Adore every part of me,

Seeing nothing but my natural beauty.

 

And if you love me,

Than I'd be all you need.

Filling all your fantasies,

You would never look beyond me.

 

So if you love me than tell me why?

What were you missing that i couldn't provide?

I know it was you who was lacking, couldn't be me.

Because when i look in the mirror, a spectaular woman is all I see.

Flirty and sweet, I can charm almost anyone.

Wearing a smile as bright as the sun.

 

Maybe you never loved me, and just couldn't see all my gifts.

But i know the love I gave you, will be missed.

You craved something different, put another woman before me.

I thought i was enough for you, but I still couldn't make you happy.

 

I know I'm average looking, with flaws i try to hide.

But if you love me, I'd remain perfect in your eyes.

You wouldn't give another woman attention,

that was meant for me.

I would be cherished, and you would see,

nothing but my natural beauty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I welcome spelling corrections since I have to re install my word program. lol

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

another amazing write.......... i agree with u all the way. that if someone really loves another person they will accept them and love them with flaws and all ............. I LOVE IT

[BEEGE]

Well said young one!
I liked reading this.
But like I tell my lady and like
what you said at the beggining,
If a person loves ya then they will love
the flaws too. Anyhow, this was nice.

[Danielle Asher]

all i know is you said it! I was just talking to some of my women friends about this. I am so sorry you had to endure any pain but you have the right message exactly. Nobody is worth it if they do not know how beautiful you are and the kind of gem you are to love. You are not average looking. You sound like you SHINE! Don't ever forget it. You sound like a strong woman. Very honorable and great for all of us insecure women to read.

Thank you!!

peace and love,
Danielle

[Tara Jean Olson]

bravo! Your natural beauty is the eloquence in which your language portrays!

[Taja B.]

This is a very nice poem. It's pretty well written, with emotion, flow, and it shows so much confidence and inspiration.

Nice job. Thanks for sharing.

[King James]

Thats a nice poem I really like the postive vibeoyu maintain on how instead of steady pointing the finger again and again you remain on who you are, this not only shows strenght but control!! Talk abotu driving your own destiny... Great write!!!

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Awwww, man, u know i just really loved this so much!!! I wanted to write something like this about me so much, and what u said was absolutely flawless. Not only that, but it was inspirational as well :) Extremely well said hun! Bravo!

Mikey