Drifting..
A Poem by
Ivory
I was experimenting with this piece.
© 2018 Ivory
Reviews
I often wonder if reality is just in our mind? Is it just a concept to each of us?
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Everyone has their own interpretation of reality.
Your experiment was totally successful. =) I like the background and the poem carries a deep meaning that's left to the reader's interpretation.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Your experiment was totally successful. =) I like the background and the poem carries a deep meaning that's left to the reader's interpretation.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for your review.
i like the poem, the message is very clear, this is the first time for me to review your poem, hope you will continue to write with this kind of depth
Posted 6 Years Ago
i like the poem, the message is very clear, this is the first time for me to review your poem, hope you will continue to write with this kind of depth
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you. I hope you take time to read some more of my work.
6 Years Ago
i will little by little
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Added on March 15, 2018
Last Updated on March 15, 2018
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Ivory (Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA
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I express myself through poetry. It has helped me get through some obstacles in my life, and I’m stronger now than ever. I love feedback and I appreciate all who take th..
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