I designate this poem as one of my favourite here on Writers Café.You have such a wonderful soul, so filled with love and truth. You are a breath of rose scented fresh air, for the way your words touch me. You got style, but most important of all, you have a voice in this world. And that is an imperative course of action in this world, the beauty of the word, its miraculous divine nature, its conception in the soul, and its array of applications and manifestations in the world, and the blessed human that receives this divine attribute and puts it to good use, will be talked about and be the subject of many people's wish, such as you.
May your inner intuition manifest a thousand times, seeing through your third eye, beyond your sixth sense, for your insight and foresight guide like lights.
WELL DONE
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Wow. You are very flattering. Thank you for you lovely review of my work. I am happy that you saw th.. read moreWow. You are very flattering. Thank you for you lovely review of my work. I am happy that you saw the beauty of my words and how they describe the love I have for my one and only😊
I designate this poem as one of my favourite here on Writers Café.You have such a wonderful soul, so filled with love and truth. You are a breath of rose scented fresh air, for the way your words touch me. You got style, but most important of all, you have a voice in this world. And that is an imperative course of action in this world, the beauty of the word, its miraculous divine nature, its conception in the soul, and its array of applications and manifestations in the world, and the blessed human that receives this divine attribute and puts it to good use, will be talked about and be the subject of many people's wish, such as you.
May your inner intuition manifest a thousand times, seeing through your third eye, beyond your sixth sense, for your insight and foresight guide like lights.
WELL DONE
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Wow. You are very flattering. Thank you for you lovely review of my work. I am happy that you saw th.. read moreWow. You are very flattering. Thank you for you lovely review of my work. I am happy that you saw the beauty of my words and how they describe the love I have for my one and only😊
Relational love can stand the test of times regardless of who's involved. A strong loving bond can conquer any trial or tribulation that may try to tear apart a heartfelt union. Great work. An inspiring and sentimental work of written art. :)
The first and last lines serve as beautiful book ends to this heartfelt and encouraging piece of love and growth.
I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing
"Moving forward
Never looking back
For in the past
We lacked the knowledge we have today
We now know together, we belong"
High praise for this lovely poem. Romantic...:)........................
The second round can sometimes be the best. We think we know it all when we're young, but those bruises we experience shape our wants and needs in a mature way. When those needs are met in a new situation, perfection can be created. Beautiful letter to the one who healed you. You still got it :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you. I always look forward to a review from you. Its nice to know you still enjoy my work.
Warmed my heart, while giving me a tinge of jealousy. I remember this hopeful, positive outlook. :)
I love the sweetness. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. There was a time when I thought I wouldn't feel this way again. Thank goodness for second.. read moreThank you. There was a time when I thought I wouldn't feel this way again. Thank goodness for second chances : )
The positiveness within this write...renders throughout the entirety of the read...and shows the impact of what a solid foundation of a relationship can be...all the way down to the last line word of the meaning --- which has become and continues to be...
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I express myself through poetry. It has helped me get through some obstacles in my life, and I’m stronger now than ever. I love feedback and I appreciate all who take th.. more..