The End...

Again I love deeply
And again it is not given equally
The more I open up
The more I give up
So I wait anxiously
Everything can be taken away, instantly
You will feel nothing,while I will hurt incredibly
Your love, shadowed by your rage and disrespect
Do you see what your words have done to me?
I fear I may never truly be happy
For everyday I'm left to wonder
Is this the day you leave me?
Is this the beginning of the end?
If i have to go through this agony again, my heart may never mend
So please don't pretend!
Saying I love you, does not take the pain way
When I know deep down your looking for a reason not to stay.
If I give up, you will be free
You will walk away and not think twice about me.
I want to feel safe again,
But I'm filled with fear
I don't want to face the truth
The end is near...

Author's Note

My poetry is created from my journals and life in general. I pay no attention to grammar, if you know me then your use to my style ; )

Reviews

[Deuces]

This rings very true when that first feeling of emptiness hits in a relationship. That fear of the end can be paralyzing and it's told so well in this poem. You can feel the insecurity and fear of one who has been hurt and does not want to part ways with the comfort of present love. You haven't lost it one bit... glad to read you again.

[Ivory]

Thank you so much for your feed back, coming from a old cafe homie it means a lot ! Lol

[Deuces]

For real. Been 6 years I think? smh.

[Ivory]

Yeah 6 years ; )

[Ruth]

Fear is such a powerful emotion...I understand the emotion behind this piece - well thought out :)

[Ivory]

Thank you for taking the time to review my work : )