Under the Sheets

Under the sheets

Bare skin, vulnerability

Caressed in satin

Private solitude

 

Halfway there

Blurred mirage

Longing for dreams

High off of love

 

Gentle caress

A touch barely there

Soft hidden kisses

Sweet quiet sighs

 

Blush creeping out

Heart beating fast

Eyes closed in darkness

Delicately parted lips

 

Shared in the moment

Distance is gone

Warmth for the night

Under the sheets

Reviews

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

Sweet, lovely moments of intimacy. You captured this with your choice of words!

[Eagle Cruagh]

You wound me up clicked run and
turned me loose. I kept looking for
loose sheets and then I found yours.
Bravo ! I liked this poem so much that
I just crawled in and warmed myself in
the glow of your talented mind.
---- John

[Rachel]

The words in the first stanza seem unfocused and slightly jumbled to me. However this piece is amazing. Wonderful description and flow. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice poem of romance. We need to know the nights of love and a warm body near under the sheets. I like the description and the flow of the excellent poem.
Coyote

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Sensual, romantic and cute. What a lovely piece!

[Omegax45]

I like this poem. Well done.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is very sweet and romantic. I love your choice of words in this one. Well done..xx

[Sunni Davis]

Very sensual and warm. Nicely written!

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

This is really quite perfect. The words here are so perfect for the work... great write!