Cold Walls

She cries the loneliness away

And shouts accusations in her head

They echo back into her shadows

And pulse throughout her empty shell

Their voices sound inside her mind

Her quiet pleas are left unheard

T’was such her lonely world

She walks with placid routine

No aimless step wasted

Such beauty, they say, such power

But they hear not the cries in her head

The heavy cloud she carries

The secrets no one knows

All they see is her carefree smile

I’m haunted, she whispers to herself

She returns to her place of solace

Back to the walls who have seen her tears

No warmth in their touch

No words of comfort for the sobs they hear

Such pitiful routine

Such sad regress

Just sleep my darling

And don’t touch the walls

The chills in their touch will creep in your dreams

Just sleep….

Reviews

[∂αʌ<..]

exquisitely beautiful!
love this!

[Sunni Davis]

This is so chillingly beautiful. I felt her pain and sadness in each word.

[joshua deathdealer]

"don't touch the walls" loving it. Well done.

[The fallen of innocence]

beautiful and disturbing at the same time, it's very well made and i enjoyed it :3

[Groovy]

This is an extremely powerful and profound write.

[light and ashes]

So beautiful!! I love this SO much!!!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A masterful and flowed worded piece, well done

[gothicchica]

good

[L. Catherine]

So disturbingly beautiful. Excellent job!

[Lily Mae]

"The chills in their touch will creep in your dreams"
Just sleep...

I absolutely love this and this line nails it.. locked inside the four walls of life and self is the feeling I got from this.. and excellent write..xx