Hot Water

What would it feel like if hot rain fell from the sky?

Burning and scorching all the passersby

We’ll wonder if God’s angry and had to cry

Those bittersweet tears that were wholly divine

 

What are those bright stars that fall from your eyes?

They land on my shoulder and stain your goodbyes

Save and collect them until the right time

Return them to the heart that used to be mine

Reviews

[Ruth]

Love it so far love...we take so much for granted....I wonder what hot rain would feel like to....this is really vivid!
xx

[clairvoyantmars]

i still plan to add to this. but i'm blocked right now. but how've i done so far? :))