Hot Water

What would it feel like if hot rain fell from the sky?

Burning and scorching all the passersby

We’ll wonder if God’s angry and had to cry

Those bittersweet tears that were wholly divine

 

What are those bright stars that fall from your eyes?

They land on my shoulder and stain your goodbyes

Save and collect them until the right time

Return them to the heart that used to be mine

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

Short but powerful with so many meanings. J'adore.

[Audrey Howitt]

Lovely write and I love how I can see God within the human pain your poem portrays!

[Muse]

Interesting and refreshing take on God, rain, and human pain.

[Lily Mae]

Intense write.. well penned emotions..xxx

[compositionc]

A really good poem. Flowed really well.

[Bailey C. Writing]

This was beautiful! It flowed so well, it was sweet and sincere, so emotional. And it almost sounds like a song, like it could have a melody to it...good job

[Max]

Love the flow of this poem. Short and sweet :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and perfect, a well written piece, great read.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Bravo! Bravo!
Just beautiful....would make the most emotional song.

[H]

Chilling, it will stick with me for quite a period of time I love it(: