What Difference?

What Difference?

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

They said it wouldn’t work out

Don’t find out way too late

They said we’re just too different

What difference does it make?

 

We’d wake up in the morning

In our house by the sea

You gulping down your coffee

Me sipping at my tea

 

I loved the noontime quiet

You loved the big rock bands

But when I want a quiet walk

We’d go out holding hands

 

You see they had it all wrong

If only they could see

Our precious times together

What difference could there be?

© 2011 clairvoyantmars


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There is always some difference but isn't that what we love about that special someone?:) If everyone was the same, indeed our world would surely be boring!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


No two people are exactly the same. That what make them special. The different in two people can draw two hearts together. I like the logic in your words. What keep two people together is laughter and the time they spend together. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good, clairvoyant. I love this write. Silence is golden, especially with the one you love.

Posted 13 Years Ago


They say opposites attract :) What really matters is those quiet moments you share that no one else can see. Lovely, creative poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Difference can only make it more interesting! This is determined and a lovely piece xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow...this is what love is all about...wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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clairvoyantmars

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I've been seriously starting to write my own novels since 2008. So far, I've finished three novels and have a lot of unfinished ones piled up. I also write short stories and poems and the occasional s.. more..

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