What Difference?

What Difference?

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

They said it wouldn’t work out

Don’t find out way too late

They said we’re just too different

What difference does it make?

 

We’d wake up in the morning

In our house by the sea

You gulping down your coffee

Me sipping at my tea

 

I loved the noontime quiet

You loved the big rock bands

But when I want a quiet walk

We’d go out holding hands

 

You see they had it all wrong

If only they could see

Our precious times together

What difference could there be?

© 2011 clairvoyantmars


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Opposites attract my dear, you make this so clear, beautifuly written my dear. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes, it's the differences that bring couples together. I like it. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


OOOOH! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this one!
It's SO simple, yet it hints at the personality at 2 completely complex people! I TOTALLY loved this read, and I honestly couldn't find any mistakes in it :) Great read, and simply enchanting!
DO IT AGAIN!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is amazing! i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


the differences are what make life interesting and relationships thrive. you've got it
all right here. wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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An adorable poem! Loved it so much. The perfect couple type of simple wording and flow. Amazing! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Moving words. With a touch of pain. Excellent piece

Posted 13 Years Ago



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clairvoyantmars
clairvoyantmars

Philippines



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I've been seriously starting to write my own novels since 2008. So far, I've finished three novels and have a lot of unfinished ones piled up. I also write short stories and poems and the occasional s.. more..

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