What Difference?

They said it wouldn’t work out

Don’t find out way too late

They said we’re just too different

What difference does it make?

 

We’d wake up in the morning

In our house by the sea

You gulping down your coffee

Me sipping at my tea

 

I loved the noontime quiet

You loved the big rock bands

But when I want a quiet walk

We’d go out holding hands

 

You see they had it all wrong

If only they could see

Our precious times together

What difference could there be?

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

Very soft and loving, nice atmosphere and flow to the whole poem, touching and sweet. Good job dear :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Loving and soft. Beautiful~

[Lisette Gentry]

cute poem :)

[-Scribe in Style-]

They said we’re just too different
What difference does it make?

Love these lines!
Well done!

It is a good simple write. I am missing some element of depth.

[Dean Steven Nichols]

It’s probably me, although it’s well written, I feel something’s missing.

[Audrey Howitt]

This is sweet and tender and really well-crafted. Congratulations of a great write!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the phrasing! The only difference makes is what the couple feel and want.
Excellent poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A mind enhancing piece, that speaks to the reader, well done

[Clay Feet]

It works for the two of you, you will have the final say
Waiting for "they" hardly ever points the way
For hearts to blend differences into sharing love
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Well-written view refuting the opinions of others
with facts.

[Ian Faraway]

I don't quite get the transition from the first line to the second line....The second line (to me) made no sense. OTHER THAN THAT, I enjoyed reading it. J'adore.