i was  not sober for this one and i was also very openly sad

i was not sober for this one and i was also very openly sad

A Poem by Claire Downey

id rather have the taste
of your goodbye on my lips
than any new hello
but all the leaves on the trees
and stars that shine
must go away 
sometime

© 2015 Claire Downey


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A lovely little poem, it is filled with sadness but you give the reader much imagery. Also you have a universal theme here which many will relate to.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


A lot of thoughts and wishes in the poem. I liked the honest tone and wish. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Claire Downey

9 Years Ago

You're too nice, thank you very kindly
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on October 12, 2015
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Tags: sad teenaged girl with an addict, its not cute

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Claire Downey
Claire Downey

atlanticcity, NJ



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im claire im not the greatest writer but i like to do it. these are just works from my creative writing class so far this year more..

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