GOOD MORNING!

inspirational

GOOD MORNING!

how are you today,

the sun is shining

its gonna be a nice day,

GOOD MORNING!

hello clouds,hello breeze,

today its not gonna be your day

the sun has ordored you to seize,

GOOD MORNING!

birds and other gods creatures

good morning my brothers and sisters,

live today to the fulless and make it count

its gonna be a beautiful day ,so take alot of pictures,

written by:CRYSTAL L KLOSSKI  

Author's Note

just writing,,,,,

Reviews

[Frank]

A very positive poem, a jolly bright thing. It reminds me of those jolly people we meet who are so happy it seems and yet it is but a front to get through the day, hiding their misery, lack of a boyfriend or the smell of the cancer eating their bowels day by day.

One tiny note regarding punctuation, I can live without capital letters or full stops but commas are sacred and have no space before them, never, and always have a space after them. break that rule and readers switch off and devote their time to negativity and not to reading your poem.

[crystal klosski]

thank u for taking time to read my writing,,,,all opinions are welcome,,,my writing isnt near perfect yet,,,its a working progress,,,lol

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the content and the tone of the poem. A hopeful dance of words leading to the every good ending. Always good to take photos. The lasting memories we can hold forever with photo and in thoughts.Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote