The Randomness of My Mind

My mind wanders
 

Broken

          Shattered

Peices falling to the floor

 

Heart

        Bleeding

tears flowing

        knocking persistently on the door

 

Leave

        Lonely

sadness lurks in the shadows like a stranger

 

 

 Hope

           Faith

Light and Dark battle askew

 

Love and Hate

                  are one and the same

 

Happiness and Anger

                          lead to betray

 

Souls mourn

                Souls heal

Souls forgive souls who deal

 

Good and Bad

                   Light to Dark

Peak over the line but do not cross

 

 

STOP!

          Let me sleep!

Bring me to dreams that escape reality

Author's Note

Just a bunch of random thoughts racing through my mind.

Reviews

[Chaos]

I loved this. I'm sorry it's taken so long for me to write to you about this, but random does as random does. Anyway (s), I loved the push and pull of your thoughts and I think the way you structured this piece supports that motion of what everyone in this world goes through. You were able to pull an emotion out of randomness and that is talent. Nicely done!

[Emily B]

Spill it all out in pixels and then
maybe
you can sleep.

[[untitled]]

Nicely done. I like it, especially the first stanza.

[JadedSparrow]

Just a bunch of random thoughts but they fit together. Funny how that works sometimes. I enjoyed it none the less.
JS