Love's magic spell

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Blue eyes twinkling with merriment,

Laughter rings out over the land.

Happiness engulf their bodies

As lovers walk hand and hand.

Troubles and worries

They disappear while in each others’ arms.

So they stay intertwined

All night long.

The night turns into day

And they know they must part

But love has woven its magic spell

Around these two hearts.

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I love the economy of words.
Untold volumnes have been written about love,
this small poem brings us the fundamentals in a
few words and may speak as deeply of the subject
and as profoundly as if it were expanded into thousands
of words.
Excellent !
Mr rating is 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Dra'Gon]

A sweet dream in which so few truly share in.

[Brianna Brie]

Oh yes, I have experienced that kind of love. Floating from dawn to dusk just to be able to see him again. Enchanting write!

[Chahklat]

Enchanting. A magical spell is such a wonderful concept. "love has woven its magic spell" - the way the poem is woven is almost magic. The second stanza is my favorite. Like magic...