Dear Dad...

One letter,
of lies,
of slander
of cheat,
of bull s**t,
of fiction,
of flasehood,
deceit.

won't change how I feel,
won't change how I hate
can't change me now,
it's too little, too late.

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

Wow...
Brutal. Flawless.
So few words, so powerful.
I'm left three degrees colder than I was before I read the piece...
Fantastically well done.

[T]

nice and short. good job.

[Forist.johnston]

You've turned pain into beauty and beauty into art. Simple, precise, and perfect. Kudos.

[lilfeather]

A beautiful poem. Short and sweet. Very good!

[AmeliaRose]

i love this! it sounds like a song! it' s perfect to me! great job.