Fizz

Once you had so much love
for me you said it was
spilling over like a shook up
beer bottle

But instead of drinking it up
you put the cap back on

Reviews

[light and ashes]

well said for a metaphor.

[Emily B]

So unique, all the story in a nifty little container.

[Bubo]

Think we have all been there, but a very good use of metaphors......... and a feeling of lingering sadness.