This Perfection

No time like the present...

These candid snapshots sparkle
in freeze framed isolation
capturing a faint flame flicker
still life force, or essence,
aching to return, to join
its mirrored, other half.

This perfection, this ideal,
in languid circles running
through murky thought - so cavern damp,
its condensation nuclei,
radically free, it rains upon me,
to hasten liberation.

Reviews

[keyvan]

I like this......thanke you

[B-poet]

Exposing an underlying poetic truth within the confides of your inner soul. I deeply enjoyed reading the written words you choose to signify the basis for a well endowed written perfection of personal inner convictions. Great write. :)

[Sarah Redigan]

i liked this so much i had to read it twice .. so visual .. beautifully written

[junaid altaf]

sometimes moments bring perfection..............
and we leave them unnoticed..............

[Everett DeValle]

Really nice, no time like the present...just live for the moments...I love the rhythm to your poem.

[Gandré]

Such a beautiful l yricism, well-expressed urge for feeling life...

[Krithika Raghavan]

A wonderful and masterful usage of vocabulary

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Enjoyed it
well penned!
it would be perfected if metered ;)

[Sami Khalil]

An enjoyable read...:)

[zainul]

A crave for liberation.
Well said.
Well penned.