Beds

       Beds

 

Beds are soft and cozzy.

Some beds are lompy and uncofertabul.

But my bed is so cozzy you could die.

Author's Note

dipidy doo

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

very cute. this is almost a haiku. Nice work. I need my bed right now.

[Dezaraye]

I'm glad you have a cozy bed! That's a wonderful thing to have. I like how you've observed this and written it all down. Very nice poem.

[Emily B]

It is nice to have a comfortable place to sleep. You used some big words here. I like that.

This is sweet! I liked how you described beds. How true this is! I did notice a couple of words spelled wrong but overall this is pretty good!