My Dreams

My Dreams

A Poem by garrett

 My Dream

My deam can be in the jungle i would visit a monkey.

If  my deam was to go to Antartika i would visit the pinwin.

If my dream was to go to Aisan i would visit the elephant.

If my dream was to go to my house i wold visit all the animal because it is a jungle.

© 2008 garrett


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garrett
its true my house is a jungul

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Nice Garrett !!! And whoever thought your mother could live in a jungle with so many creatures.

Posted 15 Years Ago


nicely done, garrett. I like this one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


yes who said the jungle is so bad ,who said tidy is so good ,i like my place to be messy somewhat ,it adds life to it,we then meet so many animals are not we in some way like that ,a kind of..i think they are even better ,they know no malice which we are very good at

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your house is a jungle, but never, never boring.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow, sounds like we should all visit your house, huh? Are you the ring leader of the jungle?

I like this poem, it's fun. Dreams are crazy things sometimes, aren't they?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2008

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garrett
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