riding bikes

you can go fast

you can go slow

you can go do trick

you can ride up ramps

Author's Note

hope you like it

Reviews

[Dezaraye]

Very good observations. It sounds like you really enjoy riding your bike. Keep writing!

[Emily B]

Line by line. You're adding to the length of your microscopic epics. Good job.

[Rain]

Great. You might want to change trick to plural " tricks ". Your picture is too cool. Rain..

[Sally Edwards]

Ahh a slightly longer poem, your observations are good, keep writing