girls
A Poem by
garrett
girls are nice
girls are sweet
girls are supportive
© 2008 garrett
Author's Note
hope you like this
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I like how observative you are in your writing.
Posted 16 Years Ago
very cute. since you are related to Emily I will accept your invite...and I am sure you will enjoy this site. peace and welcome to writers cafe....
Posted 16 Years Ago
very cute. since you are related to Emily I will accept your invite...and I am sure you will enjoy this site. peace and welcome to writers cafe....
This is a very good observation piece. You did a really great job with it.
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is a very good observation piece. You did a really great job with it.
good
Posted 16 Years Ago
good
I do like this one, and I think it's super cool to use Mom's picture. Why not try to make your poems six lines, see what they look like. Very good. Rain..
Posted 16 Years Ago
I do like this one, and I think it's super cool to use Mom's picture. Why not try to make your poems six lines, see what they look like. Very good. Rain..
Hey garrett, this is also short and sweet, you should have a go at a six word only poem, the only downside i see you this poem is it feels slightly incomplete to me. I feel there should be more.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Hey garrett, this is also short and sweet, you should have a go at a six word only poem, the only downside i see you this poem is it feels slightly incomplete to me. I feel there should be more.
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Added on March 29, 2008
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garrett richmond, KY
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i like to read. i do history with my family.
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