A Friend

 

      A friend

 

A friend is truthful.Afriend is nolble.

Afriend is nice.

I make a new friend every day they are really cool.

Author's Note

This is my first start.

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

Short and sweet, I like this, very true in every way, welcome to the writers cafe :)
Sally

[Angelic Darkness]

A friend



A friend is truthful.Afriend is nolble.

Afriend is nice.

I make a new friend every day they are really cool.

This is a simple, yet ordinary poem, but it was also sincere.
I would like to point out a couple of things to you.
In this line: A friend is truthful.Afriend is nolble.
after you wrote truthful., you need a space to start the
next line. When you write Afriend, it should be A friend, another
space between the two. Nolble is misspelled, and should be noble.
This line:
I make a new friend every day they are really cool.
You should have a coma after every day.
I would suggest to really proof read your work.
keep practicing.

[Writer CW Kirkland]

This is a good poem with a simple message. There are some opportunities to correct grammar or spelling (i.e., "nolble" should be "noble"). I am also curious if this poem is about dogs or if the main character is a dog because the attached photo includes a dog. Thank you for sharing your writing on the Cafe.

[Dezaraye]

This is beautiful, Garrett. You really know what a true friend is and that's a priceless thing to know. I'm glad that you invited me to be your friend, I'm excited to get to know you. Keep writing, you're good at it.

[NCPanthersgurl]

It's very short; it might be better placed as a free verse poem. Other then that you have a decent start.