legand

read scary poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Legand

      There once was a man called freddy cruger, who walked up on people  and their names are Juanm, Juan a, Edger p, and juana. They were walking and herd a sound with out them knowing, they looked at him and was like wtf is that that i see so than they have got a look and ran and screamed their lungs out he has got 2 people and killed them with bood goosing out and their paile selfs with you than seeing their bones.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dylan I. Cree]

Yeah I was expecting more. You also have a lot of grammatical errors that can be easily fixed. You should always check or try to check before posting. Could have been longer too. Also why did you use a number instead of the word and the wording doesn't always make sense. All and all I thought it could more scary.

[r]

uhm... not 1 of ur best.... more like a very short story... i wouldn't call it terrible but its deff not the best poem i have ever read.... try and al in stanzas

[universe-explorer]

i see that you are kind of attracted to short poems, but good work. keep it up