Breaking down

This poem sucks! Seriously, I am dissipointed in it.. but I have ot up for you to see... as you can tell I wrote this when I was very emotional.

Slowly losing sanity

Mind is breaking down

All thoughts lack clarity

No voice above this sound

 

Never thinking straight

Stumbling around

Refusing to speak late

No voice above this sound

 

Knowing that its ended

The snap the only sound

Emotions becoming blended

Mind has broken down

Author's Note

Yeah, this one is terrible.. but still what did you guys think??

Reviews

[James]

well, i like it

simple, but it gives you an emotional sense
a twisted roller coaster

but, what's the cause of this poem?

and it sounds like it could be some pretty tight lyrics
I kind of messed around with it in my head

i like it